Jul 4, 2012

Master Thesis Revise Log

2012-7-4 Chp3 by Takayama

General comments:

Delete most of coordinate conjunctions, such as However, ....
Caption of figures is too poor. More explanation is reqyuired.

●This chapter should begin as

"The KEK Digital Accelerator consists of ........."

●Requirement of the chopper is not related to saturation of the
induction cells.
●We don't call "Einzel lens chopper" to distinguish from the
conventional one.
●Explanation of LEBT is too poor.
●Beta function and Dispersion function should be unfamiliar to TokyoTech
staffs. You need to put some explanation for them.
●What is the under curve in Figure 3.14? Figure 3.13 and 14 can be
combined.
●Limitation of the present induction acceleration system should be
correctly classified.
(1) Volatage
1-1 DC voltage (you describe)
1-2 Maximum output voltage
(2) Pulse length (from voltage droop)
(3) Rep-rate
●Figure 3.24 is deleted.

Ken Takayama